Author: Andy

Anecdote

One day i was in my english class and everybody was using there phone but the teacher picked me out of everybody in the whole class and took my phone for the rest of the day. The next day i was on my phone again and i was showing my work on edutronic to Silas then it got taken for a week. When i finally got my phone back after a week he theatened to take it for a month if he ever saw it out in English again.

Persuasive techniques

Technique 1:

deliberate use of pronouns

he, they, we,i ,it, them, their

practise task:

re-write this,changing pronouns to either include or distance your audience

  • He always gets results from hard work.

Diary Entry For: The Other Side Of Truth.

What the book is about is after the murder of their mother, twelve-year-old Sade and her younger brother are smuggled out of Nigeria by their journalist father to escape the corrupt military government and growing violence. They are sent to their uncle in London, but when they arrive, he is missing and they are abandoned, passed between foster homes. Their father escapes to England to find them — but he will be sent back to Nigeria unless Sade can find a way to tell the world what happened to her family after their mother got assassinated by the military because of their fathers views.

Satire

This is an inspection carried out by the school government.Hi my names Bob and I’ll be inspecting the London Nautical school on 17th February 2015. The London Nautical school toilets are so clean with loads of water running through the taps and a sufficient amount of soap whitch is refilled annually so the children don’t get any germs.the venterlation is also good on the top floor where there is a hole in the roof whether hot or cold. The teachers are also as  smart as Wayne Rooney. Also at the end of the day the teachers care about us so much that there are no cars in the car park.

Romeo & Juliet Essay!

 

William Shakespeare was a popular and legendary play writer  from the  Elizabethan era in 1558. Shakespeare’s plays have stood out since he started writing plays  and still appeals to audiences today. He wrote classics such as `Romeo and Juliet`, `Macbeth’,Hamlet and `The Taming of the Shrew`.  In Romeo and Juliet Shakespeare explores the idea of fate.

what is fate?

Fate is a development of events outside a persons control, it is regarded as pre-determined by a supernatural power for example God  if you have a religion and you believe gods are real then what ever you done good or bad on earth you will be sent to heaven or hell. Romeo and Juliet’s untimely death could be down to a number of things, their parents feud or the haste of their relationship but I believe it was entirely down to fate.

Romeo and Juliet met entirely by fate and immediately fell in love. They begin a relationship plagued with bad luck and then tragically both die. I believe their lives had been planned and there is nothing they could do to change the course of their destiny. It is obvious that Shakespeare had intended everything to happen for a reason and decided that fate would rule their lives. . Fate is also like destiny because we cannot change it. I think William Shakespeare uses  fate in his play Romeo and Juliet to make it look realistic and interesting.

One part of fate is just before Romeo goes to the Capulet ball  where he meets Juliet and falls in love and says he has a funny feeling. Another part of fate is when Balthazar comes to Romeo and tells him that Juliet is dead but the letter didn’t get to Romeo because friar john was under quarantine because of a disease not knowing that Juliet is actually alive Romeo goes to the apothecary to get poison so he can kill him self because he love Juliet a lot.

There are lots of events and actions in the play that link up to fate. one of them is romeo outside the capulet house saying.

” I fear, too early: for my mind misgives I fear, too early for my mind misgives                                                                                                                     Of a despised life closed in my breast                                                                                             By some vile forfeit of untimely death.                                                                                            But He, that hath the steerage of my course,                                                                                 Direct my sail! On, lusty gentlemen!

In the play Shakespeare uses metaphors consistently, he would construct a sentence using words that have different meanings to what he wrote, that is what a metaphor is. For example a in speech said by mercutio a chraracter in the play goes on to say “Begot of nothing but vain fantasy,Which is as thin of substance as the air” ., this means that in romeos head is in the clouds probably saying he is nieve , saying that fantasy is as thin as air is basically saying that you shouldn’t trust your fantasy and stay I the real world because you won’t do no good up there in your own little world. In this paragraph mercutio is trying to talk sense Into Romeo and trying to snap out of it.

 

The prologue of the play reveals a lot about the plays theme and how fate plays an important part in the play. We are told that Romeo and Juliet are ‘star – crossed lovers’ (destined for bad luck) and ‘death marked’. we know that their relationship will be plagued with death.but they couldn’t marry each other because Romeo was a Montague and Juliet was a Capulet.The prologue of the play reveals a lot about the plays theme and how fate plays an important part in the play. This is also in the prologue

“Two households, both alike in dignity in fair Verona where we lay our scene from ancient grudge break to new mutiny where civil blood makes civil hands unclean from forth the fatal loins of these two foes a pair of star crossed lovers take their life whose misadventur’d piteous overthrows doth with their death bury their parents strife the fearful passage of their death mark’d love and the continuance of their parents rage which  but their children’s end nought could remove is now the two hours traffic of our stage the which if you with patient ears attend what here shall miss, our toil shall strive to mend”

which means  In the beautiful city of Verona, where our story takes place, a long-standing hatred between two families erupts into new violence, and citizens stain their hands with the blood of their fellow citizens. Two unlucky children of these enemy families become lovers and commit suicide. Their unfortunate deaths put an end to their parents’ feud. For the next two hours, we will watch the story of their doomed love and their parents’ anger, which nothing but the children’s deaths could stop. If you listen to us patiently, we’ll make up for everything we’ve left out in this prologue onstage.

 

 

 

how to start the essay

-Fate

Prologue:

Predetermines Romeo and Juliets fate

Events:

-Tripping on

-chance meeting of servant with guest list.

-friar johns quarantine.

Language:

“He that hath….”

1:scour through your own notes for other refrances to fate.

2:for every point your going to make,find a full accurate quotation.

3:develop an out line of your essay part by para.

Intro:

Para1: the whole play is structured around the idea of fate through

2:foreshadowing prologue

3: Co-incidence -meeting servant friar john quarantine

4:Language metaphor: stars/bark

5:Character references:direct quotes about fate.

6:Imagery symbols of God/fate

7:advanced lambic pentameter/creates an endless rhythm like time itself.

 

 

Elizabethan Theatre Presentation.

A Elizabethan theatre was a place where people would go and enjoy them selves with friends and family. You could also  find huge crowds which usually fill the theatre. The amount can be around 3000 people. The amount can increase as the time goes by. The Elizabethan theatre was a booming business. people loved the Elizabethan plays. The theatre was popular as the movies and cinemas in the early 20th century. Vast amounts of money were made during the period of time when the theatre was open. The inn keepers increased three profits by allowing plays to be shown on temporary stages. Costumes were often bright in colour and visually entrancing. Costumes were expensive, however, so usually players wore contemporary clothing regardless of the time period of the play. Otherwise, costumes would be recycled and used in multiple different plays multiple times until it was too worn to be used. Occasionally, a lead character would wear a conventionalized version of more historically accurate garb, but secondary characters would nonetheless remain in contemporary clothing.

Andy – Shakespeare's Life from Edutronic.net on Vimeo.

fate in Romeo and Juliet.


What is fate?

Fate is where pre-determined events lead to a final destination . Shakespeare creates tension through constant references to fate in Romeo and Juliet. An example of this is Shakespeares use of language. In this metaphor “let he that hath steerage of my course, direct my sail” which Romeo says before the capelet party in act 1,scene 4.

Another example of fate was when balthasar came to Romeo and said that Juliet killed her self not knowing that she didn’t didn’t want to marry Paris but Romeo didnt get the letter to say that she wasnt dead because they were in qurientine so they couldn’t post the letter.