This is an inspection carried out by the school government.Hi my names Bob and I’ll be inspecting the London Nautical school on 17th February 2015. The London Nautical school toilets are so clean with loads of water running through the taps and a sufficient amount of soap whitch is refilled annually so the children don’t get any germs.the venterlation is also good on the top floor where there is a hole in the roof whether hot or cold. The teachers are also as smart as Wayne Rooney. Also at the end of the day the teachers care about us so much that there are no cars in the car park.
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February 26, 2015 at 11:45 am
Its a good piece you just need to write more
February 26, 2015 at 11:47 am
In your piece of work I like the way you used a simile to improve your work I think you should check the form of writing your writing in.